Essay 2: Academic Research Paper: Mindfulness and Self-Awareness
As we have discussed this term, mindful writers are self-aware, but what does that term "self-awareness" mean and how does it translate to other parts of our lives as well? What does it mean to be "mindful?"
For this assignment, you will write an informative paper exploring some aspect of this topic that interests you, but one that you don't know a great deal about. Your topic must be an academic and scholarly one (one appropriate for a highly-educated audience). This will likely mean that you need to approach the topic from a scientific, philosophical, and/or psychological perspective. Your topic may venture into physical health and/or mental health, but make sure it is grounded in specificity and that you are asking a very specific research question.
Mindfulness/self-awareness, philosophy, psychology, physical health, and mental health are very broad areas of inquiry, so you shouldn't have any difficulty finding a topic that interests you.
NOTE: NOT ALL VIDEOS MAY BE APPROPRIATE FOR OUR RESEARCH AREA, SO CAREFULLY CHOOSE WHAT YOU WATCH. WE ARE ONLY USING THESE PODCASTS TO EXPLORE IDEAS AND DEVELOP A POTENTIAL RESEARCH QUESTION. THE RESEARCH YOU USE IN YOUR PAPER MUST BE FROM A LIBRARY OR LIBRARY DATABASES ONLY.
This assignment is designed for you to learn to explore complex issues and difficult, abstract, or unusual ideas and in the process discover and learn something about yourself and the world. As a writer you have a responsibility to your readers to make these difficult concepts concrete and understandable. While writing, try to avoid vague generalizations. Where do you get the examples to develop your essay? Which examples support your thesis? Which do not? Which are the most convincing? Which are the most likely to interest readers and clarify meaning?
You will need to conduct outside research on your topic. You must use dependable, reliable sources. These include book chapters, articles taken from books, magazine articles, journal articles, and newspaper articles. The majority of your research should be taken from peer-reviewed academic journals. YOU MAY NOT USE WRITTEN SOURCES FROM THE WORLD WIDE WEB AT ALL!
The overall word requirement for this paper is a minimum of 5 full pages and no more than 7 and it will require library research.
To receive credit, your essay must include at least five to seven written outside sources of research information pertaining to your subject that present varying positions and perspectives of it.
Purpose
The primary goal of this paper is to inform, explore, look for connections, and create new knowledge of your own. The point is to educate your audience about the varying views of the topic and to explain why each group holds these opinions. It is very important to remember that you goal is merely to inform, not argue or convince. Present the material in an unbiased way and present possibilities rather than certainties.
At all times, your tone should be fair and balanced and you should avoid argumentative language. To do this, you will need to use both qualifiers and author tags (see class notes).
Audience
Your audience is a highly educated one. They are academics, scholars, professors, and experts in their fields.
Because this is a formal academic essay, you should never use contractions, informal language or slang, or the first person (“I”).
The Research Process (Step-by-Step)
STEP 1: EXPLORE IDEAS:
Begin by exploring the topics within Opposing Viewpoints that interest you. Initially identify three possible topics that interest you, but understand that you will ultimately only choose one.
STEP 2: Form A Research Question & Tentative Thesis:
We will cover this step extensively in class
Step 6: Complete Draft of Research Paper from Outline
Format
Your essay should have a title. It should also be typed, double spaced, with one-inch margins all around, Times New Roman Font, & 12 pt. Your paper should be 5-7 pages and have a works cited page. Refer to the required writer's handbook for this class for other questions about format and citations using MLA style. You may also refer to owl.english.purde.edu. You should have a minimum of five to seven written sources.
NOTE: You must demonstrate your writing process to receive a grade for this assignment. Keep all planning work, brainstorming, freewriting, clustering, revision workshop responses, workshop questionnaires, SmartThinking Report and revision plan, reflections and submit at least one rough draft. Keep all other versions of your paper, however REMEMBER, NO PROCESS, NO GRADE.
Final Draft, evaluated on the following criteria:
Total Possible Points: 100/
Focus (26 points): Does essay have a clear purpose? Focus on a main idea and clearly identifiable thesis? Are reader’s expectations set and then met? Ideas, examples, and reasons developed in the body of the paper are clearly related to the main focus?
Development (26 points): Are supporting examples, showing details, and data rich and relevant to the main idea (i.e., writer discusses when artist worked, artistic movement, movements of the period, what characterized the movement, history of the particular artwork, how it compares to artist’s other work, etc.)? Are the writer’s assertions immediately followed by supporting evidence? Appropriate research supports the writer’s main idea or thesis? The writer shows how or why evidence is relevant to main idea or claim?
Organization (26 points): Do ideas and paragraphs proceed in logical and apparent sequence or pattern? Does writer use sufficient audience cues to let the reader know what has been discussed, what is being discussed, or what will be discussed? Does writer use attention-getting title and lead-in, essay map, summary and forecasting statements, paragraph hooks, transitional words and phrases? Do effective conclusions guide the reader from beginning to end?
Style (11 points): Is language clear direct and readable? Are sentences clear, concise, and easily read by intended audience? Is word choice appropriate for audience? Do sentences reveal and sustain appropriate voice and tone?
Mechanics (11 points): Are there obvious errors in spelling, punctuation, and grammar? Are there patterns of error? Citations formatted correctly?
NO 1ST DRAFT ON DUE DATE (-7 POINTS)
NO REFLECTION (-7 POINTS)
NO PROCESS OR PROPER CITATION OF SOURCES=NO GRADE
Grading scale:
A 90-100
B 80-89
C 70-79
D 60-69
F 0-59
